Monday, October 19, 2009

Excerpt.

Still trapped in the tangled web of her destiny… Still trying to balance emotions; assuage hurt egos and frayed tempers. Still trying to resolve situations that were not of her creation. Still trying to balance all sides of all metaphorical relationship equations. Still trying to keep everyone else happy and still trying to find her own happiness in the happiness of those she loved. Continually feeling more and more helpless, knowing there was going to be no respite, save one… The final *********


Author's Note: These few lines are actually part of a long story that I've written. But after penning down the first draft, I realized that the story was soooo close to my heart that I couldn’t bear even the thought of anyone debating or even discussing anything in the story. So, while the story stays with me for now, I let these few lines find their way onto my blog :) BTW, anyone who attempts to judge the content or central idea of the story through these lines is fooling himself :p The story is NOT related to women at all. It's a true masterpiece, a work of art, something even I'm proud of(which is hard, considering I'm not easily impressed ;) :D )...

12 comments:

anjali said...

Ur writing contains loneliness expressed in such a beautiful manner, that even loneliness seems romantic... One almost wants to experience the loneliness and the emptiness thinking it will bring some kind of masochistic pleasure...

Nice... wish u'd have shared the whole thing with us... :)

...Arshdeep said...

@ anjali

Ha Ha... But u're a hopeless romantic, we all know that... :D :D

BTW... aaj comment kaise kar diya? ;)

Galaxy6139 said...

By your words we can image how complex our feeling is ^^ alway struggling

anjali said...

@ arshdeep

Calling me a hopeless romantic... Look who's talking :p ;)

priya said...

@ arshdeep n anjali

Couldnt help but joining in ;) :D
Like u said arsh... anjali is finally commenting so its a reason to rejoice ;)
But seriously, arsh... u arent going to show us the story?? Really?? You're gonna let no one see it...?? Come on... kisi ko to dikhayegi hi... ;) :D

Awww... i hope u change ur mind... i love reading watever u write :)

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MK said...

hey, thats unfair :( .. .. story to padha puri.. .. it is a humble request to the kind author to publish the story on this blog so as to bless us with the opportunity of reading a masterpiece .. .. .. .. ..:(

...Arshdeep said...

@ Galaxy6139
:) :)

@ Anjali
Bas bas bahut ho gaya..... :D

@ Priya n MK
Dekhti hun yaar... Thode time mein upload kar dungi... Maybe when i'm not that senti abt it ... :p

sabia said...

itne 'pyar' se log tujhe 'humbly ' request kar rahein hain..'kindly' dal de na ;)
'OBV' this comment isnt for posting :P

...Arshdeep said...

@ Sabia

I didnt follow.... Exactly why isnt ur comment for posting?? :D